Thank you for asking and of course, for taking an interest in what I do - it's really nice of you. OK, it was nerve wracking but ultimately rewarding. I did receive a few laughs and more importantly, loads of useful feedback, such as:
My character Malcolm was interesting
The punchline didn't work
Good use of dialogue
It flattened down towards the end
The shopkeeper should deny everything
Pervert: Actually could be an alternative title
Of course, this makes naff all sense without seeing the sketch in it's entirety, so if it's fine and dandy with you, I'll do a re-write and post it on the blog at some point? I wish I had somebody to collaborate with, but everyone is seemingly paired off at The London Comedy Writers or prefers to write alone. Oh well, with my psychology course at City Lit commencing on Tuesday, 17th September I won't be able to make any meetings until late October and hopefully by then I would have got my act together a little better? Maybe.
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